Excellent. Keep writing.
Note- If a 'Quote' is coming spontaneously and instantaneously then its ok. Otherwise you sd not waste time in that. In essay and ethics quotes necessarily fetch you good marks.
@Shatarupa Mishra may give you more feedback.
Good attempt. I agree with Ashis Sir here. No need for quotes in GS answers unless it's Paper IV. You have linked the challenges and solutions well. Keep it up
Please rewrite the answer, linking the answer to current affairs. Your answer should first have covid and how it led to migrant crisis.. Then address the challenges that rural areas have in accomodating these returnees and how existing rural infra can be improved. Then you must write about the schemes of the govt.
First line needs to be rewritten. Secondly add more schemes of the govt. If you are writing about a survey results, you must quote the survey and the statistics or else it's vague. Conclusion is too generic and essay like.. You have given good solution. Back it up with current affairs
Yes mam I could have given the some of initiatives taken by various govt of states promoting afforestation and making playing grounds to promote sports culture.. Do i here need to mention the sate name.? And mam could u tell me how should I conclude here?
Excellent. Keep writing. Note- If a 'Quote' is coming spontaneously and instantaneously then its ok. Otherwise you sd not waste time in that. In essay and ethics quotes necessarily fetch you good marks. @Shatarupa Mishra may give you more feedback.
Good attempt. I agree with Ashis Sir here. No need for quotes in GS answers unless it's Paper IV. You have linked the challenges and solutions well. Keep it up
You have missed the context. Follow @shr0ud 's answer.
Please rewrite again. First half of the answer needs to be aligned with the question. You can add more current affairs examples
Please rewrite the answer, linking the answer to current affairs. Your answer should first have covid and how it led to migrant crisis.. Then address the challenges that rural areas have in accomodating these returnees and how existing rural infra can be improved. Then you must write about the schemes of the govt.
@Shatarupa Mishra plz review
Ok mam
@Shatarupa Mishra mam kindly recheck
First line needs to be rewritten. Secondly add more schemes of the govt. If you are writing about a survey results, you must quote the survey and the statistics or else it's vague. Conclusion is too generic and essay like.. You have given good solution. Back it up with current affairs
Yes mam I could have given the some of initiatives taken by various govt of states promoting afforestation and making playing grounds to promote sports culture.. Do i here need to mention the sate name.? And mam could u tell me how should I conclude here?