China is using its economic relations and positive trade surplus as tools to develop potential military power status in Asia. In the light of this statement, discuss its impact on India as her neighbour.
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Jun 20, 2020
· Edited: Jun 20, 2020GS II (International Relations)
GS II (International Relations)
Fantastic. Covers all the points well. Good job. Trim your intro if you can. But rest is excellent.
@Padmaja Sahoo @K Pushpendu Prashant please see this answer. So far the best.
Thank you sir.. I will work for intro.. thanks for ur review. It's encouraging
Good..
@Manas Panda pl see
Sir , i have re posted the second part of my answer Now both page are there in the platform
Shorter intro suggested.. content is overall good.. what is the Massala Port in SL you are mentioning on the conclusion?
Read Pushpendu's answer above. The ideal answer should take points and styles from both your answers. Your points are stronger, more contemporary. His presentation is more exam centric. @K Pushpendu Prashant pl see
Thnk u sir fou your review.... Sir its mattala port in the southern province of SL where India is funding developmental project to counter China's project in Hambantota port
Good.. read my comments above as well...
Points 1.1 & 1.2 are not fleshed out well. I get what you are trying to say. But writing it like this is an over simplification of sorts. Suffice to write that due to rise in its economic profile (as the world's largest manufacturer), China has been able to fund it's military infrastructure.
1.3 can be for later.
Cut down on first two pages and focus on examples for making your answer more impactful. See the first two answers.